麻烦大家帮我看下这段英文有需要修改的地方吗?
He had been driving with a painted Monarch butterflies look like miniature aircaft follow Monarch butterfly to Mexico.
Mexican children wearing clothing with butterfly wings to meet him.
华文要的大概意思是:他曾经驾驶一架被涂成MONARCH BUTTERFLY 样子的微型飞机跟随MONARCH BUTTERFLY 到达墨西哥.
墨西哥儿童身穿带有蝴蝶翅膀的服装迎接他..
没有人发言是因为不需要修改吗?
求教J版!!
呼唤J版!
J版请赐教!
多谢娘娘指教! 更正中………
学习了！非常感谢’！
试试这个，如果你是要强调＂同样一种蝴蝶＂的话．．
It was monarch butterflies that he tattooed on his miniplane once he piloted to pursue their enormous migration up to Mexico. Likewise, he was greeted by Mexican children whose dresses featured the very same butterfly too.
看了你们写的觉得自己比小豆豆班的水平都差太远了……感谢!
现在觉得想要学好英文还真不是容易的事!学无止境….向偶像敬礼